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Metal Metariu character story development

Post by Disastrous Omu on Sat Jul 04, 2015 9:29 pm


Metal Metariu is the main male protagonist of the series Chosen Beta and is a first-year High school Student at Eikumei in Hong Kong. He possesses BoltedDox a technique of a green exploding energy blast. And later learns Rondayvoo BoltedDox with 8 colorful crystals forming the BoltedDox for a new level energy attack. Metal Metariu is a pretty chill dude but sometimes gets into trouble in messed up situations without knowing what trouble he is gotten into. But He fights himself back out. Although being mature he gets drag into violence and trouble along the way. He has no experience in reckless street fighting but he tries anyway when he is being threaten. When getting into dangerous situations with bad guys that can be way stronger then him. He challenges them and puts his life in the line to protect others in need of help. One of Metal hobbies are exploring, playing videos games usually playing ps4 on his phone using ps4 controller. A recent occasion he notice a giant mob a Gang called the Violent Branch chasing a weird looking Creature and later on saves The Alien Yeti (weird looking creature) and forms a friendly relationship. The relationship between Metal and Terrance becomes dangerous when getting obliviously involve. Metal then explore places around the world & beyond and later is known as Omu.


Sole Speaker to one eye. Parrot Beak (Main Power of a cyclops Parrot Beak covering Left Eye inside it is a Golden Eye) He has 2 forms known as Viscous Omu and Miraculous Omu. These Parrot Beak transformation gets revealed by fighting off his friends demon sides, also Hajime Pisuke and Reiki Merger and getting most of the help from Elliot Axel fighting off Seiji Mciver The Demon Bone King. These Forms reveal throughout tough opponents in the continuation of the plot. Mostly mainly using Parrot Beak 1st form (Viscous Omu) for critical laser attacks.


Metal is Age 16 and his height is 168cm. He Possesses black Hair and black eyes. He is a nice looking teenage boy. He sometimes consistently wears a white T shirt with 1 red line on top and 1 blue line bellow Horizontally on the middle of the shirt on the left top center of the red line there is a red circle and a black tree. He wears Black pants with laces and a belt. And has brown shoes with laces. Another clothing he wears is a black and white t shirt with collar with a cool design. etc...


Metal is the son of Oegri Metariu & Jun and Grand son of Klemetti & Lieftet (Oegri Parents)
and Jun only has a mom her name is Rosalie. During his childhood Metal Grew up with his brother Motarike and his best friend Elliot Axel. During the birth of Metal and Motarike. Motarike was born with another person in him name Seth. The ones who knew about this was Metal and his Family. Seth is a demon magician who is a mime clown he prefers calling himself Mister Seth. Seth is a evil version of Motarike. There was no History to the family about Demons or Sorcery. Seth was like a big brother to Metal and Metal was like a big brother to Motarike. They spent all this time together as a family keeping this a secret. Seth was always plotting a personal Conjuncture for the alternate universe he lived in but nobody knew. If something in the alternate universe would be affected the real world wouldn't be affected. At age 10 Metal entered Seth Universe by accident when sleeping. Metal spend 2 years in that universe and was missing in the real world for sometime. A place where he learned magic. After returning home Metal decides to leave home and joined a society of demons and magic.

Life in Hong Kong:

Metal met some friends from the alternate universe of Seth within the past 2 years at age 10 - 12. In Hong Kong Metal had a friend name Elliot Axel who he always hangout with time to time. When being a part of a society of demons and magic Metal became a member of Class Vessel. At age 16 as present Metal Welfare became decent and Class Vessel provided a place for him to stay. Metal and Terrance always hangout in a variety of places there prior goal is to go find out who is Terrance the Alien Yeti and to turn him back to human and to find his creator. In and Out Hong Kong Metal gets involved with gangs, mafia's and gets mixed up into military trouble. Which these people have supernatural powers and great martial arts. Metal plans to teach Violent Branch the gang a lesson and getting answers for what they are doing. Being into Class Vessel and having Alien yeti by his side could be troublesome because of the trouble it can cause for Metal although this is his job. Class Vessel although is all about battlefields and danger they are meant for cultivate and ranking levels for Students with supernatural abilities. Class Vessel is also a agency for hunting and collecting what they will need for there society. The society Class Vessel puts Metal at a school name Eikumei as a first year high school student. Although school it self doesn't have much students with abilities most of them have no powers. In certain times Metal sometimes visits his family to see how they are doing. Metal and Motarike also like each other company and sometimes they team up with Elliot Axel and fight troublesome people. Elliot Axel learns his abilities by feeling the energy of things with power he learns about absorption for his sword. His sword turns to a energy source of a pitch fork. Mainly using the power of lightning as his weapon as things progress he learns typhoon as he swings his weapon where twisters of wind come out and another level of it is more powerful name ichinose typhoon. His power is called energy source. Motarike at the other hand is later known as Mister Mister. Motarike does not have any abilities he is a brawler and has a immune system where he doesn't feel pain. One day Motarike found a imp devil named Elko and with Elko he gives Motarike a equipment of magic weapons as he transforms himself as a weapon. And as Seth comes out these powers increase. These characters progress with there abilities by upcoming events through time. Elko was found by a mafia as a slave working for them. Motarike meets Elko in a deserted place. Elko chose's Motarike as his source of power and as his master. In Eikumei High School a brown haired girl name Kobayakawa Pine shows up as a new character in the story. Metal first meets her when Metal started having a conversation with his master in Class Vessel in town with Alien Yeti (Terrance). She became suspicious seeing an Alien Yeti when walking by. Metal and Pine have notice each other and seen each other at the same class in Eikumei High school. They ran into each other and she said "what is that" Metal said "Its a long story". That's how it started They became close friends and every now and then they see each other. The Class Vessel Arranges Metal for beating up gangs and mafia as a quest its sometimes is a one man job.  After sometime Metal brings out his friends from Seth universe, also Elliot Axel and Motarike to fight off the Mafia that used Elko later on Metal fights off three members. As the team spreads out for infiltration and attack to the mafia. As In the Hajime Pisuke Arc. Out of the three members Metal is fighting Reiki Merger, Seiji Mciver the Demon Bone King, And Hajime Pisuke. The reason why Metal and his team is attacking the Mafia ZamaZura that coexist with other Demons and Magic is because they are the one of the worst generation's that bring harm and trouble to Hong Kong. Metal Metariu becomes loyal, strange and heroic he forms a a great team of members in and out Class Vessel. As Pine grew fond of Alien Yeti (Terrance) she starts hanging out with Metal and learning about his world that is psychological, supernatural, and his path.

Terrance Transformation Arc.

ugly character designs hope I can have awesome character designs:

I would like my character design to be as cool and similar to this

Metal Hair is like this but his hair is black

the bangs mostly like this


I think Its time to show me this effort of yours

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